Saturday, 11 of February of 2012

Patience is a virtue….sometimes.

For the past few years, I have been working on my first novel, Purgatory.  It was indeed a process of writing and rewriting, editing and then editing it once again.  A storyboard was created, used, scrapped, redone, then finally used to create a strong finished product.

I finally completed the product in the end of July, after having both Craig and Keith read and edit it.  I then fixed all my mistakes, which were many, and placed the final period on the story Purgatory.  It was one of my greatest accomplishments as most people talk of writing a book but few get around to it.

So I sat down and wrote, what is called, a query letter.  It was a one page letter which covered several topics.  I had to give a brief, and I mean brief, synopsis of my novel.  My 255 page book was reduced to one paragraph.  This was tougher than I thought.  I had trouble because my novel is really original and has many moving parts.  After that, I had to inform the reader of who I was, in a brief biography.  Who am I?  Well this was my first novel.  After that?  Hmmm, married, child, history, video games, Mets.  These aren’t exactly selling points; especially my love of the Mets.  Basically I spent one page selling my book.  And again, this is a tough tough process.  Everything has to be perfect.

Next came the process of finding a literary agent.  Once I finished my book, I thought, “no problem with this one.  I will just send it to the agent that interests me most and wait for the request to read my manuscript”.  Unfortunately, that was my first rejection.  I re-read the agent’s website and decided that maybe my genre just wasn’t “for him”.  So I found several more agents that specialized in both young adult lit, as well as historical fiction.  I knew, just knew, they would all say yes.  However, more rejections.

So here I am 14 rejections later.  I am a bit closer as an agent did ask to read my manuscript.  14:  No/ 1: Yes.  While that is considered a minor slump in baseball if a batter went 1 out of the last 14, it is considered a minor victory in the writing world.  Sure my hit was a bloop single.  If she shows more interest, then we can make it ground rule double.

The reason I write this is because it was an eye opening and humble experience; one which I am still stuck in.  I currently have 50 query letters out, with only one yes.  I am sure a lot of the agents haven’t got around to reading my letter, some never will.  One agent sent me a rejection letter just minutes after I sent my query.  In his rejection response, he apologized for it taking so long to get back to me and said this project may not be for him.  Hmmm, a long time in responding?  It was minutes.  It MAY NOT be for him?  It either is or isn’t.

I am not worried that eventually someone will pick up on my novel and they will be happy they did.  It is original and not the typical vampire/wizard book that young adults normally read.  I have had four people read it and heard great responses from them.

So I won’t give up and I will keep plugging away.  Maybe this agent that asked to read my book will be excited enough to want to work with me.  Maybe she won’t and I will move on.  I might be surprised and have several of those 50 agents ask for my manuscript.  They could also all turn it down and I will continue my search.  Either way, I have to be patience.  I don’t really have a choice.

PURGATORY: coming soon


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    avatarcderosby

    in August 28th, 2010 @ 07:50

    Hang in there. It is a great story and there is an editor out there who will realize that fairly soon.



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    avatarAlan Derosby

    in August 28th, 2010 @ 10:32

    Oh I am not worried. I think it will get picked up sooner rather than later. I just thought some people might be interested in the fact that it is a process. When I first started, I thought it would be picked up already.



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    avatarBFielding

    in August 28th, 2010 @ 15:40

    I want to read it!!! And whe nit does get published, I want my first edition (that I will pay for) signed. I actually want 2 first editions signed. One I will cash in on for retirement because when you are a famous author and have a gazillion books under your belt, that first book, first edition, signed will be worth major cabbage!



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    avatarAlan Derosby

    in August 29th, 2010 @ 04:26

    Brian, unfortunately I would not bank my retirement on it. You might not want to cash in your 403B just yet to buy that motorcycle.



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    avatarKeith

    in August 29th, 2010 @ 15:22

    I think it was a great read. It made me want to look deeper into the lives of the characters. In fact, I did just that. If that's any indication of what it could do for young adults then you're on the right track.

    Good luck, and hope your success doesn't go straight to your head.



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    avatarAlan Derosby

    in August 29th, 2010 @ 15:33

    Too late. And you are????



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    avatarAlan Derosby

    in August 29th, 2010 @ 15:34

    Just kidding. If this one sells, then I will need to set up our Borden bed and breakfast trip.



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      avatarcderosby

      in August 30th, 2010 @ 14:28

      I think we should plan on that whether it does or doesn't.



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    avatarAlan Derosby

    in August 30th, 2010 @ 15:20

    I agree. We should go either way. Also, that haunted place in Vassalboro has tours.



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